March 4, 2012 · 9 Comments
We know the exact reality
Deep in the horn’s balcony
The home of good mentality
That the world thinks it’s fantasy
…
We see the flourishing democracy
And the beautiful Statehood odyssey
Adopted by the people of modesty
Running their lives with good policy
…
We know the land of peace
Where goodness always is accepted with ‘Yes’
Making the trouble incidences less
Though locating in a region full of mess
…
We know the Africa’s success story
People of Somaliland who deserves glory
But received a bad respond of ‘Sorry’
Especially From those driving the big lorry …
By Adnan Abdi Shaadiro
© March 2012
cadnaanr@yahoo.com
Struggle will continue unabatedly
Our Unity always linger steadfastly
We do Consensuses building daringly
Our caring and tolerance speaks amply
People of the planet take a note decently
Our endeavors for Somaliland we seize joy
Brainstorming for the betterment go globally
Our charity contribute a wide autonomy solely
well done excellent poem
Nice poem. Good one
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The basis and point is absolutely great in intention, but the whole set up and rhyming is amateur, sorry just a critic?
Welcome Khatumo State of Somali, we need sister states in the north just as the south has many. If Somaliland thinks it can deny the right to self determination to any region or clan, then Somaliland will end up losing that same right itself.
The title should have read like this: The World Knows Its Fantasy
Struggle will continue unabatedly
Our Unity always linger steadfastly
We do Consensuses building daringly
Our caring and tolerance speaks amply
People of the planet take a note decently
Our cyberspace Cinderella thrives blazingly
Our Brainstorming in advance internationally
Our charity contribute a wide autonomy stably
Our Bottom up approach deals more delightfully
Other top down weight encounters ill eccentrically
Our clash to heedlessness undermines incompatibly
Our forgiveness unwires vast arteries very imprecisely
Our wisdom for sensible wide world wins spectacularly
Our endeavors for Somaliland intertwine Horn’s stability
Our Elders reasoning revisit pasting legacy overpoweringly
Our Lord bless Elephant track at Hargeisa hilly breast fondly
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